Thursday, March 06, 2008

Mere Sur, Meri Duniya ...

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Dil kiya aaj phir,
phir liye baithi hoon main,
ek kalam, ek kagaz, kuchch rang syahi ke,
ukerne phir ek baar, apni tamannao ke aks.

Ek dhun ka chehra dikhta hai mujhe,
gungunaati hoon ek geet kuchch bhoola sa.
Yaad aate hain vo tanhai ke pal,
jinka mann me lagta hai kabhi ek fera sa.

Aaj saaz uthaane ko phir jee chaahta hai,
phir ungliyan saath chaahti hain un taaron ka,
jinhe chherne se nikalti thi dil ki awaaz mere,
jinke suron par gaa uth ta tha aangan mera.

Kehte hain sur dheere se mere kaanon me,
awaaz do humein, daude chale aayenge.
Tumhaare dil ki awaaz, aks, shabd, rang nahin,
sirf hum hi hain jo sun paayenge.

Uthao saaz, chhero vo nayi dhun,
jo haath pakad tumhaara, le aaye yahan,
jahan baste hain muskurahat aur pyar,
jahan hai tumhaari apni duniya.

Duniya jisme tum ho aur sangeet hai,
duniya jisme hum hain tumhaare sangi saathi.
Jahan door tak faila asmaa,
aur us asmaa ki zameen us me simat ti, sharmati.

Maan li suron ki baat maine,
thaame haath, phir rakha kadam vahan,
Jahan ye sur hi mere saathi, mere mann meet hain,
Mere bhoole khwaab, meri chhoti si duniya hain jahan.

Duniya jisme ik behti dhara, ek ghar, ek sansaar hai,
jisme mere mann ka saare geet, har saaz hai.
Duniya jisme ek indra-dhanush ke rangon me bikhra,
mere mann mein chhupa vo ek chhota sa khwaab hai.

~Neha

3 Response to Mere Sur, Meri Duniya ...

Thursday, 06 March, 2008

Nice one Neha, However I think u had many thing running through ur head when u were writting this down.....I don know how many thing u are trying to convey here :P.......

Duniya jisme ik behti dhara, ek ghar, ek sansaar hai,
jisme mere mann ka saare geet, har saaz hai.
Duniya jisme ek indra-dhanush ke rangon me bikhra,
mere mann mein chhupa vo ek chhota sa khwaab hai.
ye tera dream to i know...koi mila kya iske liye jo tune poem main likh dala :P.....

Uthao saaz, chhero vo nayi dhun,
jo haath pakad tumhaara, le aaye yahan,
jahan baste hain muskurahat aur pyar,
jahan hai tumhaari apni duniya.


tumharee duniya :o ..... abe apnee dunia batate hain log poems main kisi aur ki nahin.....



now da best lines in this one:

Maan li suron ki baat maine,
thaame haath, phir rakha kadam vahan,
Jahan ye sur hi mere saathi, mere mann meet hain,
Mere bhoole khwaab, meri chhoti si duniya hain jahan

wow....kitne sundar abhivyakti ki hai aapne Neha... yahan pe mere bhoole khawab...meri choti si dunia....

Thursday, 06 March, 2008

Thanks a lot vipul .. Lemme go and blush for a bit .. :) ..

and i wasn't thinking a lot of things at all .. :) .. I didn't tell you everything that day .. :)

as for these lines

jahan baste hain muskurahat aur pyar,
jahan hai tumhaari apni duniya.

Read again, I meant the 'sur' to be saying those to me .. not me.

Wednesday, 09 April, 2008

I found my dreams
but the moon took me away
It lifted me up to the firmament
and suspended me there
I saw how my heart had fallen
on your path
singing a song